What Makes a Great Cover Letter

INTRODUCTION
A great employment application cover letter does more than summarize your résumé — it tells your story, connects your experiences to the employer’s needs, and conveys your motivation and personality. Most cover letters spend too much time talking about the candidate’s interests and too little addressing the employer’s needs (as expressed in their advertisement).  Cover letters should be forward looking, while resumes recite what you’ve done in the past.

Here’s what makes a cover letter stand out:

1. Strong Opening

  • Personalized greeting: Address it to a specific person (e.g., “Dear Ms. Alvarez” or “the Search Committee Chair”) whenever possible.

  • Attention-grabbing lead: Start with enthusiasm and purpose — explain why you’re excited about the role or how your values align with the organization’s mission.

  • Example:  “As a passionate advocate for equitable access to higher education, I was thrilled to see the opening for Director of Student Success at [University Name].”

2. Clear Fit Between You and the Role

  • Identify three key skills or experiences from the job posting and show how you’ve demonstrated them.

  • Use specific examples rather than generic statements.

    • Instead of: “I’m an effective communicator.”

    • Try: “I led a cross-departmental team that improved staff retention by 15% through clearer internal communications.”

  • Tie each example back to the employer’s listed goals or challenges.


3. Authentic Tone and Voice

  • Write professionally, but naturally — avoid overly formal or cliché phrases (i.e., “I am writing to express my interest…”).

  • Let your personality show. A genuine tone makes you more memorable.

4. Concise, Focused Structure

  • One page, three to four paragraphs:

    1. Introduction — who you are and why you’re interested in them.

    2. Body — two short paragraphs linking your experiences to their needs.  Do not repeat your resume!!

    3. Conclusion — express enthusiasm and invite further conversation.

5. Closing with Purpose

  • Reiterate your enthusiasm and how you can contribute.

  • Politely suggest next steps.

“I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my leadership in strategic planning and organizational development could support your team’s goals.”

6. Polished Presentation

  • Match the tone and formatting of your résumé.

  • Proofread carefully — errors can undermine an otherwise strong application.

  • Use a clear, professional layout with consistent fonts and spacing. Explain any acronyms.

Here’s an example of an excellent cover letter tailored to a higher education leadership role, such as Senior Consultant, Vice President, or Director-level position. It demonstrates tone, structure, and the balance of professionalism and authenticity that makes a letter compelling.


 

Sample Cover Letter for a Higher Education Leadership Role

Mary Kennard
[email protected]

Phone: XXX-XXX-XXXX

[Date]


Dr. Jennifer Morales
President, Crescent University
100 University Drive
Boston, MA 02114

Dear President Morales,

As a higher education leader who has dedicated more than four decades to advancing institutional excellence through strategic planning, legal stewardship, and collaborative governance, I was immediately drawn to the opportunity to serve as Vice President for Administration at Crescent University. Your institution’s commitment to fostering inclusive academic success and innovative partnerships reflects values that have guided my own career in both university leadership and consulting.

In my tenure as Vice President and General Counsel at American University, and later as Senior Consultant with Academic Search, I have led initiatives that strengthened institutional resilience and organizational culture. At American University, I oversaw comprehensive policy reforms and implemented campus-wide compliance programs that enhanced transparency and trust between senior leadership and faculty. More recently, I have advised presidents and boards on executive recruitment and succession planning, helping align leadership competencies with strategic priorities and mission outcomes.

What has always motivated me most is the opportunity to bridge vision and operational excellence — ensuring that sound governance, human resources, and fiscal strategies translate into thriving academic communities. I take pride in being a collaborative problem-solver who builds relationships across divisions, and I would bring that same approach to advancing Crescent’s goals for institutional growth and innovation.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my experience in strategic leadership, organizational development, and higher education governance could support your mission. Thank you for considering my application — I am genuinely excited about the prospect of contributing to Crescent University’s continued success.

Warm regards,
Mary Kennard

 


 

Why This Cover Letter Works

  • Personalized and mission-driven: References the university’s values and connects them to the applicant’s own.

  • Leadership-focused storytelling: Demonstrates tangible achievements and leadership impact.

  • Polished yet human tone: Professional, but conversational and authentic.

  • Purposeful close: Reiterates enthusiasm and invites next steps.

Here’s a customizable cover letter template designed for senior or mid-level leadership roles in higher education, nonprofits, or mission-driven organizations. It includes editable sections and guidance notes so you can tailor it easily for each opportunity.

 


 

Higher Education Leadership Cover Letter Template

[Your Name]
[Your Email Address]
[Your Phone Number]
[Date]

[Recipient’s Name]
[Recipient’s Title]
[Institution or Organization Name]
[Institution Address]


Dear [Dr./Mr./Ms. Last Name],

Opening Paragraph — Introduce Yourself and Your Connection to the Role.
Start by expressing your enthusiasm for the position and institution. Mention how you learned about the opportunity and connect it to your professional identity or values.

Example: “As a higher education leader committed to fostering organizational excellence and inclusive campus communities, I was thrilled to see the opening for [Position Title] at [Institution Name]. The university’s dedication to [specific mission, initiative, or value] strongly aligns with my own professional philosophy.”

Second Paragraph — Highlight Key Achievements and Impact.
Select two or three achievements that best demonstrate your leadership impact and relevance to the role. Use specific, results-oriented examples and emphasize collaboration, innovation, or measurable outcomes.

Example: “During my tenure as [Your Role] at [Previous Institution], I led [specific initiative or project], resulting in [tangible outcome such as improved efficiency, enhanced student outcomes, or strengthened governance]. I also [second example], which reinforced a culture of accountability and shared purpose across divisions.”

Third Paragraph — Show Alignment and Forward Vision.
Describe how your experience and approach align with the institution’s mission and strategic priorities. Show that you understand their current direction and articulate how you can contribute to advancing it.

Example: “I am particularly inspired by [Institution’s initiative, e.g., a strategic plan, diversity initiative, or student success program]. My background in [specific expertise] equips me to contribute meaningfully to these efforts, ensuring that strategic goals are implemented with integrity and measurable impact.”

Closing Paragraph — Express Enthusiasm and Invite Conversation.
End with warmth and purpose. Reaffirm your interest and your readiness to contribute and invite further discussion.

Example: “I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my experience in [key areas] can advance [Institution Name]’s goals. Thank you for considering my application — I am eager to bring my leadership, strategic insight, and commitment to academic excellence to your team.”

Warm regards,
[Your Name]


Tips for Customizing

  1. Mirror language from the job posting — it signals alignment.

  2. Use institutional mission or Strategic Plan language (often available online).

  3. Keep it under one-page — brevity with impact. (Sentences with 30 words or less)

  4. Save as PDF for a polished, consistent look.

  5. Always address a specific person or group (avoid “To Whom It May Concern”).

 



I hope you find this Blog post helpful. And I welcome your feedback.  Please let me know if you have other suggested topics.

You can reach me at [email protected]


By: Mary Kennard, Esq.
Senior Consultant, Academic Search
© Mary E. Kennard, 2025
Updated November 2025 

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